[创作] dislikes

楼主: sylviaplath (hate summer)   2014-04-17 18:33:46
There are times when the sun never sets
Like the Arctic or Antarctica
There are times when you can't look away
You became restless, but not always to the exit
There are times when dogs aren't dogs and gods are not gods
You know them deep inside, but not always brave to prove it
There are times when you put them down into words
Words are formed in verified ways
So you may escape the blame
There are times when you choose not to cry or to get mad
You know there will always be some dislikes
But you will never call them a poem
作者: korn31910 (ç¾…æ‹”)   2014-04-17 19:12:00
mmm....a good one indeed
作者: spacedunce5 (讀不完的書)   2014-04-18 11:21:00
But you will never call them a poem. . . even though in fact that's exactly what youdidXD
楼主: sylviaplath (hate summer)   2014-04-18 14:54:00
this is in response to some lousy things i sawwhich at best can be called word vomit
作者: hahastarr (漫步中的哈哈星人)   2014-04-18 15:35:00
XD
作者: spacedunce5 (讀不完的書)   2014-04-19 20:26:00
some "poems" are like that

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