[创作] So you decide to become outlandish

楼主: hecati (Do not feed the Dirtman)   2013-04-22 20:42:21
So you decide to become outlandish as you
line your eyes with kohl.
You paint your nails blood red, dark green,
and watch them glisten fiercely in black gold.
You ride your bike faster than you should, pretending
you are on your wild mount, tearing
freely through the woods.
Primal drums throb out black boxes,
impregnating the wooden floor as they flow.
While you imagine you are dancing
naked where only gods would go.
作者: korn31910 (ç¾…æ‹”)   2013-04-22 22:19:00
Like!
作者: spacedunce5 (讀不完的書)   2013-04-23 00:01:00
last two lines
楼主: hecati (Do not feed the Dirtman)   2013-04-23 00:56:00
good or bad?and thanks guys~ ;)
作者: spacedunce5 (讀不完的書)   2013-04-23 15:48:00
good 我在推文啊XD
楼主: hecati (Do not feed the Dirtman)   2013-04-23 16:01:00
对喔...我昨晚脑袋真的坏掉了... XD thanks!
作者: hahastarr (漫步中的哈哈星人)   2013-04-24 19:51:00
超棒!我喜欢第二段:D
作者: dale (冰城城主)   2013-04-25 15:18:00
I like it
楼主: hecati (Do not feed the Dirtman)   2013-04-25 23:07:00
You guys are so kind. :)
作者: antje (antje)   2013-04-29 19:10:00
作者: korn31910 (ç¾…æ‹”)   2013-05-04 20:06:00
百看不厌! 再推!

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