※ 引述《prompter (Qu)》之铭言：
: 这是我看完前三章的一些修改建议
: 请再给我一点时间看完后面章节
: This is some of the proposed changes and suggestions before chapeter 3.
: Please give me a some time to read the following chapters.
: 想写出我中文的意思
: 但英文文法似乎有点混乱
: 不晓得可以怎么修?
: 希望有高手可以帮忙QQ
These are my suggestions for modifications after I read the first three chapte
rs, please give me more time to finish it.