最近在义务帮一个网站翻译乐评(英中)，
因为是第一次翻这种东西所以有点卡卡的，
不知道有没有人想一起讨论一下?
这是其中一段
What leaps out at me first is the pop element - the catchy hooks and
uplifting melodic aspirations of Young Life, Fog, and Noongirl are awash in
it - but it is also true that the further one goes into the album, the more
it bites and scratches and claws. Our Sixty has violent tendencies, an
amalgam of bits and pieces tied together by a guitar that is both furious and
flighty. Fill My Pain Hole is not a light or passive number by any means.
Rather, it is a darker, aggressive plea for healing. When you think about it,
wanting redemption/peace is not so out of place in the annals of pop music,
only this one is much less scripted, much more real.
最先打中我的就是他们的流行元素，引人入胜的鲜明旋律充斥着Young Life、Fog和
Noongirl，但更深入聆听这张专辑你会发现那些尖锐的小细节越来越明显，像是爪子在抓
搔着你的感官。Our Sixty听起来比较凶，吉他用锐利的金属声线营造出好斗又愤怒的氛
围。Fill My Pain Hole无论从哪个方面来看都不是一个轻盈忧伤的小品，而是一首对于
救赎既深沉又剧烈的恳求。当你翻开流行音乐史，你会发现对救赎及平静的渴望并不是曲
高和寡，但这首歌少了流行乐的俗媚，多了真挚的情感。
我觉得没有翻得很顺畅，前面几段也有一些问题想跟别人讨论
如果有人愿意和我一起试试看那就太好了