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2014-06-24 06:22:00I have substantially revised chapter three tonight,and checked the spellings, the dates of the journals,and the links to see whether they are applicable.I have also added some personal opinions.If a more detailed amendment is required,please attach a reference list for my reference.If there is no further question,I will proceed with reading chapter four.你的第二句话中文有点ambiguous 我是猜测意思翻的个人意见中文好像是指自己的意见 但你的英文指他人的意见