[题目] 这样造句可以吗?

楼主: kp008114 (巨婴)   2018-04-29 12:34:37
杂志要我用以下两个词造句
我试着造句,请教有哪里需要修改或不通顺的地方。
1.house 做动词
This box houses a gift I will give my gf for a proposal.
2.of the time 造句
我感觉用的时机是在前面有提到过去的事,后面才可以用 of the time?
Although I don't have enough money to buy a fancy gift for my girl, I have the affection to her like the acient romantic poet of the time.
请批改
谢谢各位大大
作者: NenaPolyglot (un NovioGuapo de Espana)   2018-04-30 18:31:00
第一句ok , 文法有小错误This box houses a gift (which, that) I will give "to" my girlfriend for a proposal.which/that省略,但少了间接受词前的介系词 “to”原 po 这两句造句是相连的上下文吗“of the time” 是 “当代的” (for the time being)的意思, 除非文章脉络是过去,才有“当时的” (at that time, back then)的意味但你的造句时间点是现在,语意和语用上不通,若依照原句无法使用 “of the time”, 顶多只能改写成:Although I don't have enough money to buy a fancy gift for my girlfriend, my affection for/ towords her can only be rendered by romantic poets (/ in romantic poetry) in ancient times.如果原po 只是想用 “of the time”造句,不再侷限于girlfriend ,我的建议是改写成:History refers to the social, economic, political and religious circumstances that existed inthe past, detailing events of the time (from which people of modern age draw lessons.)补充: Although I don't have enough money to buya fancy gift for my girlfriend, my affection for/towards her is comparable/ can be likened tothe poetry composed by romantic poets in ancient times.

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