[分享]TOEFL Test Ready写作两种5分风格SK2Li-Yi

楼主: sonne1419 (Sonne)   2024-05-03 15:10:21
Test Ready写作满分拟答实验- by 鸡婆的口说顾问Li-Yi
各位同学大家好,我是SK2冲刺班的口说顾问Li-Yi。你用过托福官方提供的Test Ready
Practice Test吗? 他使用跟考试一样的e-rater评估写作和口说,对于同学帮助很大。在
SK2 TOEFL社团我设计了一个猜分小测验.这边我就直接给大家两篇风格不同但是都是5分
的写作.给大家参考! 有空再分享口说的XD
#0504星期六上午公开课手把手教你做到30分口说写作回答
快速报名连结:
https://reurl.cc/g8zAOL
官方的题目是: What is important from scientific discoveries and technological
inventions
A)168字. 稍微附和一个讲者意见.三个小例子.小Essay格式
Different people hold contrasting options about the most important scientific
discovery or technological invention from the last two hundred years, and I
agree with Claire's view that medical process is pivotal in improving people’
s health. I would add that pharmaceutical innovation plays the most critical
role in advancing public health. For instance, Louis Pasteur's creation of
the first rabies vaccines not only cured those inflicted with the
life-threatening disease at his time, but also lead to the development of
future vaccines for pathogens such as the small pox virus and the polio
virus. Another interesting case is the development of the cocktail therapy
for AIDS, a disease that took thousands of lives in 1980s; with the
aforementioned treatment, patients can now function regularly like all
others. The latest example is the medication Ozempic that helped patients
with diabetes and chronic obesity to lose weight quickly. In conclusion, with
the rapid development of modern drugs, the life quality and expectancy have
become significantly higher than those 200 years ago.
具体怎么操作,欢迎报名我5/4 10:00的公开课XD
上次4/21来过公开课的同学,我这次会用不同的题目
并且带大家操作这些常用句型
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如果你有写作和口说问题需要突破/或有特定分数要达到,欢迎5/4找Rosa顾问和我来帮你!
上课日期:5/4(六)10:00-12:00
上课地点:捷运大安站11楼中央教室
上课讲者:Rosa & Li-Yi顾问
上课内容:冲刺班讲座:新制托福写作+口说关键秘密公开课
快速报名连结:
https://reurl.cc/g8zAOL
有什么问题,公开课相见,知无不言!!
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