[分享] 写作难题审题想点 by J2

楼主: robert416 (萝卜)   2021-03-02 01:38:47
大家好,我是SK2实力养成班顾问J2.
之前有分享过不少篇口说/写作审题想点,同学们没看过的可以先复习一
下:
以“定义”方式审题想点 by J2
https://reurl.cc/OXGZb3
其他例子发展的方式,也可以直接在版上搜寻“想点”看看我的文章喔!
最近刚好有同学又碰到一题文章想点觉得有困难,特别跟同学来分享一下。
题目是TPO5
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment— doing
things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
审题想点步骤:
1. 首先可以先想现在的人们“喜欢做的事”跟“应该做的事”有哪些。
现代人喜欢做的事可能有玩乐、旅游、享受美食、滑手机、浏览社群媒体等
等。
应该做的事可能有关心国家大事、用功唸书、找工作。
2. 接下来,只要把现代人喜欢做的事,跟应该做的事,想办法“扯上关
系”即可囉!
例如,现代人应该要关心国家大事,而人们现在也喜欢滑手机看看社群媒体
像Instagram, Twitter, 所以就可以说是不会花太多时间在个人娱乐上的,
因为他们同时也是在做“应该做的事”,关心世界上重要议题。
如以下这段:
I disagree that people today spend too much time on personal
enjoyment. They are actually doing things they have to do for the
following reasons.
First, people today spend a lot of time on cellphones but by doing
so, they do things they have to do and sometimes they do it even
more effectively. For example, when people using social media such
as Facebook, Instagram, or Twitter, they can easily get the most
up to date news around the world such as the black lives matter
movement in the US or the protests in Myanmar. That’s exactly
what people today should do—pay attention to what’s happening in
the world today. What’s more, people today can easily contribute
to these global events by using social media because they can
spread information quickly. They can see people on Facebook or
Twitter are signing petitions to free Aung San Suu Kyi from
military custody. They can sign the petition as well and help.
再试试看其他论点:
现在人应该要能靠自己赚钱或是能经济独立、养活自己,而现代人也喜欢追
网红,或是想当网红、Youtuber,而网红也是一个新的赚钱管道。
Second, people should make their own living and today there a lot
of opportunities to make money to live on your own. For example,
in the past, when people tried to get a job, they needed to go to
a company to work for 8 hours a day so they could pay the rents
and so on. However, today there are a lot of things you can do by
yourself, such as being a Youtuber or an influencer on any other
platform. You can just play video games and make it live and many
people earn money this way. Or some people make money by making
videos about traveling, food, or just simply their daily lives and
put them on Youtube and earn money by the counts of the views.
There are just too many ways people nowadays can earn money, and
earning money but not counting on parents is the thing people
today should do.
上面题目确实是需要花多点时间思考的,但只要平常习惯上面的思考步骤,
多加练习,还是有办法在正式考试时间压力下,快速想出来的喔!其他审题
想点有问题,欢迎随时在每周二
1300-1700来“陪你读时间”找我或是Vivian聊聊喔!不需报名,直接先来
信义路四段11F-14报到即可喔!
Cheers,
J2

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