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一向以来，送佛公开课都是扎扎实实的带着现场同学实际演练托福考题，
现在，让我们跟着老师写作的步骤，一起来认识托福写作!!
1. **审题
题目: If you had to work on a project for school would you rather:
1) work alone, 2) work with classmates or 3) work with a tutor.
假设我们立场选了(2) work with classmates
2. **Brain Storming ＝＞发想内容的ideas
因为题目是以If you.....，我们自然以<自己>来开始
可以想自己的个性，可以想自己学习经验及效果，
可以想自己work with classmates的好处。
假设第一个句子的想法是从个性开始:
Firstly, because I was very shy, so if I work on a project with other
classmates, I feel safe and have more confidence.
3. ** 将Ideas 修饰美化一下，写成了段落第一句 - 主题句
First of all, teamwork has helped a sensitive student like me to overcome my
fears and learn how to develop a high level of confidence.
4.** 想个自身的example 来支持主题句，为何teamwork overcome fears and gain
confidence.
ex:
When I was in my teens, I was too timid and vulnerable to interact properly
with other classmates.Not until a teacher assigned a group project and
encouraged me to work proactively with other peers did I start to conquer
my interaction anxiety and be involved actively in discussions.
Through cooperating with classmates on school projects, I’ve realized the
importance of teamwork. The more I participate in team discussions and
contribute ideas, the more confident I become.
Therefore, I appreciate every opportunity to work with classmates on a team
project, as this is the best chance for me to bring my strengths to the table.
这样的步骤(3) +(4)我们至少要写出两到三段，称之为body paragraphs来支持我们选择
work with classmates 这个立场
5. **conclusion 结尾段 =>最后一段，将我们上述的2-3个主题句再改写一下，
成为最后的结论
依照这五个步骤，我们就完成了一篇英文作文了。
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