想问一下8/8的托福独立写作
那天的题目是
Some people think the best way to Penilton company's and they harm the
environment such as higher tax or higher fine,
some other people think there is a better way, what's your opinion
公司污染环境，选惩罚（税或罚金）；还是其他方法stop 对环境的破坏
写完总觉得我的论述跟题目有点偏了...
不晓得我这样写reasoons有没有写离题
开头段，支持罚款有用
First,公司都很注重金钱，所以罚款会给成他们压力去降低制造污染
For example,....
Second,公司都很在意商场时间，处理罚款会打乱公司时间
For instance,...
Last,公司注重名声，罚款会让公司名声变差
For example,...
结论段