这边只讨论英文作文的部分,其他版大有想法,都可以讨论,没有绝对的好坏。
如果示范构题的话:
就要先参考题干
第一段: 描述两图片的场景,以及正在发生的状况。
第二段: 叙述该事件接下来的发展和结果。
有在follow周年庆或Black Friday的新闻,基本上都不会离题。
要记住你大概只有20分钟完成的时间,只少留五到十分钟检查语法和时态。
像这篇新闻的开头,对场景的描写也是值得参考。
"Best Buy in south Springfield opened up at 5 p.m., and by that time the line
to get in had hundreds of shoppers stretching five stores down.
Shoppers like Troy Adams spend hours of their Thanksgiving day preparing for
the next holiday."
https://www.ky3.com/content/news/People-in-Springfield-Mo-wait-hours-for-Black
-Friday-deals