Re: [问题] 一题句子请问英文文法是否正确

楼主: Nilo (辰)   2019-09-13 19:01:05
※ 引述《LSJ1111 (ROGERLO)》之铭言
: Delicious foods can always soothe my soul, especially those that are so fa
mous
: that people need to wait for one hour.
: 想请问这个句子的文法有哪里有错吗?感谢
Delicious foods, especially those so famous as to put customers in line in m
arket, sooth my soul.
加减改一下,但我认为这句话要表达的意思太多,多到不适合用短暂的插入句法来补足
意思

我觉得这样会比较好:
I like delicious foods, especially the yummy ones that I buy after hours o
f staying in line before food stands. Nothing is more refreshing than the trophy
y waiting.
我自己的改法,抛砖引玉,请见谅。
楼主: Nilo (辰)   2019-09-13 19:12:00
trophy of my waiting
作者: pptricky (苏老头)   2019-09-13 23:24:00
https://imgur.com/4R29Ucr 我在Resit版回的版本
作者: cjcat2266 (CJ Cat)   2019-09-14 02:16:00
我觉得有种回路弯来弯去的感觉耶,但我也没办法指出个明确的点,不好意思。我的话会把用字和子句减少一些,这是我的浅见:I love delicious foods, especially those worthy of waiting in lines for hours.要确认用字是否正确,我习惯直接去google检查有没有native speaker这样使用
作者: YBlueMoon (目标 真・文青)   2019-09-17 00:49:00
推楼上,读起来舒服

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