原po弱弱高三生，
英文普普，大概都在班上中段。
从小到大没人也教我怎么写英文作文，
顶多也只是改改文法错误。
全民英检初级过了以后，
就去考中级。
中级过了，又去考中高级。
中高级的写作第一次杠龟，
但还是硬著头皮没去补习。
然后就过了（没被抽到？？）
转眼已经高三，学校终于开始要求我们写作文了。
写的第一篇： An Unforgettable Birthday
交出去之后发现有几个还蛮严重的错误，像是拼字之类的。
想说这下子被扣个4，5分跑不掉。
结果发回来，
X！
分数比我预估的还低啊QQ
而且有些错误还没改出来啊QQ
ex: 最后面的“tragdy”
http://i.imgur.com/8uN8C8P.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/vgw6rPs.jpg
差点没吐血
应该是班上倒数了……
后来下课去问老师，分段落的问题 ，
老师也很清楚的回答了我。
“这种低级错误，以后不会再发生了”
我这样告诉自己，并开始加强这方面的练习。
不过，摔了个这么大一个跤， 让人实在难以放下啊。
所以啊，想请教一下这里的大大们，
剩不到150天，
我，
该怎么走出这死亡的幽谷？
以下附上文章
I once had an unforgettable birthday at 15. It was not a pleasure experien
ce at all. Instead, it taught me a lesson that I had never had before. It was
a hot summer day. Birds and butterflies were flying everywhere. I felt as free
as those creatures because my parents promised me to give me the finest gift
ever! I hoped it could be another dog because I wanted to find a new friend fo
r my dog, Dick. Dick was adopted by my father. And Dick and I have been playin
g together since I was a little child. As soon as I came back from school, I n
oticed something strange