以下是我的英文自我介绍
I've worked as a qualified nurse in the
emergency room for the WXY hospital since I
graduated from nursing college in June, 2017. In
the face of life or death situations, I am
fearless. Every time I see the pained expressions
of my patients and the worried expressions of
their families, the only idea that comes to mind
is saving their lives with an effort of will. I
am proud of my job out of a strong sense of moral
duty and hope to provide a caring environment
while on duty.
不过我担心能力不够所以会有错误和不够口语的地方
毕竟这是我要口头上做自介的而不是书面作文
谢谢热心帮忙揪出错误的学姐们

觉得可以试试先用中文写 再用google翻译 可能会好一点

文法跟选字都有误，语句都不太顺，你可能附上你想要表达的中文会比较容易知道改哪

不知道妳是做自我介绍的对象为何？是美国研究所吗？我觉得口语介绍可以再自然一点，贴近生活一点，这样才容易使人记得你。 这段介绍比较接近写作文。 加油加油！（我是定居美国的旅人）