[请益] 有没有英文好的学姐能帮我看几行自我介绍

楼主: PolyCoin (乱世雌雄)   2018-08-31 20:47:00
以下是我的英文自我介绍
I've worked as a qualified nurse in the
emergency room for the WXY hospital since I
graduated from nursing college in June, 2017. In
the face of life or death situations, I am
fearless. Every time I see the pained expressions
of my patients and the worried expressions of
their families, the only idea that comes to mind
is saving their lives with an effort of will. I
am proud of my job out of a strong sense of moral
duty and hope to provide a caring environment
while on duty.
不过我担心能力不够所以会有错误和不够口语的地方
毕竟这是我要口头上做自介的而不是书面作文
谢谢热心帮忙揪出错误的学姐们
作者: poudoudou (.. )   2018-08-31 21:16:00
觉得可以试试先用中文写 再用google翻译 可能会好一点
作者: minirin (all is well)   2018-09-01 00:20:00
文法跟选字都有误,语句都不太顺,你可能附上你想要表达的中文会比较容易知道改哪
作者: sugarpie   2018-09-02 00:41:00
不知道妳是做自我介绍的对象为何?是美国研究所吗?我觉得口语介绍可以再自然一点,贴近生活一点,这样才容易使人记得你。 这段介绍比较接近写作文。 加油加油!(我是定居美国的旅人)

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