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I am sorry to toyz.
吾愧对椅Z矣
I have thought he is captain of my team until now.
时至今日 吾仍视其为我队之首
When i came to taiwan at first, i talked with him many times.
回首初来宝岛 与之交谈多次
I hang out with him and was really friendly with him.
相携出游 共伴同行 视如己出 当为至交
I told him everything at that moment.
吾以肺腑之言相告 以能言之事相告
Also, I discussed with him about our team.
乃至本队之谬误罅漏 皆不讳言
Then we fixed our problems.
吾等齐心协力 俾补阙漏
After coach left, i was trying to be coach. But i failed because i didn't
至教练叛逃 吾将重责一肩挑起 重任一力承担
make enough scrim.
然吾功亏一篑 未能为山 此诚肇于团练之不足矣
Then he was trying to help me to make scrim. But its over job to player.
虽椅Z欲助我一臂之力 然此终非一选手能为之事
So we got people who can make scrim.
于是 吾等招人募才 助我团练
After this moments, our talk was less and less.
其后 吾与椅Z渐行渐远 不复曩昔
I felt he is difficult to me.
吾感其相处日增不易
There was big barrier between me and him.
隔阂渐起 嫌隙遂生
Then, i was upset at his saying on stream.
而后 其于实况之言 我心实悲
I posted about my feeling because i couldn't talk to him.
吾有感而发 发于脸书 书我悲愤 愤吾不能与其交谈
Then he said sorry to me and i accepted.
椅Z知其咎而谢我 我亦接受而甚慰
But i still couldn't talk to him after that.
然吾与其终不复彼时相谈之欢
I knew our relationship had problems but it was hard to fix these for me.
吾知与椅Z之情 颇有损坏 然此垣之毁 难修甚矣
About our ban&pick, i discussed with toyz and dinter in hotel room.
至于禁选 吾与二子尝论于逆旅
We made ban&pick together. It was clear.
禁选之定 实共决而成 明白无误
Main problem is that there was still barrier between me and toyz.
只叹万丈宫墙 仍立于吾与椅Z之间
After each match, i didn't talk a lot with him.
赛后 吾仍不能与之多谈
There were short talks like 'hey what we gonna ban?' , ' whats our
compoistion? '.
徒有言不及义者如 "嗟，何处将行?" "何组将为?"
It was Q&A. It was not conversation.
此为简答 实非详述
Before last match, he was talking with jj.
决战之前 其与杰杰相谈
So i was waiting for his ban&pick because i made some ban&pick in my room.
吾仍殷殷盼其禁选 并待献吾房中之术
But i didn't talk to him because time was so short.
然时短情长 不及表白
I believed him and didn't say my opinions.
吾深信其终能引我致胜 遂不言吾之浅见
I had to talk to him or discuss with him.
吾应将吾之策尽告知 亦或与之论言
After last match, i went to dinter and asked him "hey why we didn't pick
thresh?".
决战之后 吾趋而谓丁皇 "嗟，何无选希?"
Because i always talk with dinter after i felt difficult to toyz.
吾与丁皇私交甚笃 起自与椅Z不合之时
I never think toyz is idiot.
吾自始至终 未视椅Z为下愚者
He is the person who i can believe without asking.
其为吾深信而不须赘言之人
I think It happened because of my character.
此事之所以至此田地 皆始于吾之本性
I had to try to talk more when i felt barrier.
隔阂嫌隙萌芽之时 吾应早图之
I was caring of myself .
吾徒见一己之私
Although his seat is next to me in gaming house, i have been too far from him.
席近人远 咫尺天涯
I am so sorry, i wanted to make toyz champion again.
吾甚感负之太过 亦欲使椅Z重登王座
It was my dream.
此为吾日夜不忘之思也
I have been so honored to be with him.
与其共事 荣甚幸甚 殊遇难得 光宗耀祖
Thank my captain.
再拜吾之队长
鸿章曰：
噫！吾作此翻译，泪珠和笔墨齐下，不能竟书而欲搁笔。
又恐诸人不察其衷，谓其忍舍椅Z而去也，故遂忍悲为板友翻译之。
关山难越，谁悲失路之人。萍水相逢，尽是他乡之客。
欧雷此番宝岛之行，为车掌；为辅助；为演员；为作家，
其辛其劳，能解者几希？