[心得] 准备半年雅思7分(writing:6.5)写作心得

楼主: gieo (光光)   2016-07-10 12:26:48
雅思成绩:Overall 7 (听力7.5 阅读7.5 口说6.5 写作6.5)
准备时间:补习半年
一个月前有分享雅思听读心得,
几个板友站内信希望我能再分享写作心得,
于是花了些时间把重点整理打出来,
我分享的很多重点都来自时代老师的上课讲义,
有人刚好在补或补过同个老师应该会觉得这些技巧很熟悉~^^
我只分享准备起来比较有感的Task 2喔!
关于Task 1的准备技巧,大家可以去看这篇#1NCJsJCG
我觉得整理得不错,就不再分享重复的内容给大家了^^
我先简述一下Task 2的考试内容,Task 2是要对一个申论题提出个人观点,
并且要用论证或举例(具有说服力的)来说明,字数不能少于250字,
文章要符合正式文体(不要用缩写),内容前后要连贯、流畅,文法要正确。
雅思写作Task 2的题型主要分三类:
*观点类(提出自己的观点)
What is your opinion?
Do you agree or disagree?
*讨论类(讨论某议题的优、缺点)
Discuss both views
Discuss advantages and disadvantages
*问题类(说明问题产生原因、提出解决方法)
What caused this problem, and what solutions can solve this problem?
雅思写作Task 2的文章构成要件:
引言+主体+结尾
主体是就引言所提出的内容进一步说明,考验想点跟举例,这部分需要长期累积,大家可
以多看雅思高分范文学习别人的点子,慢慢建立自己的数据库。而结尾是总结文章重点,
再说明一次自己的立场,不再加入新观点。
我想跟大家分享怎么写引言~
引言要写三句:
背景句+改写题目+说明/不说明立场
我以下都以老师上课举的例子来跟大家说明,这样比较清楚!
背景句写法
题目:广告阻碍人们成为不同个体,而使人们看起来一样。你是否同意?
(这题要讨论广告的影响,就以此为中心写背景句。)
可以这么写
e.g. The influence of advertising on our buying behaviors is a subject
matter.
广告对我们消费行为的影响是一个课题。
e.g. In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to
the influence of advertising on our buying behaviors.
近几年,人们将更多注意力放在广告对我们消费行为的影响上。
推荐写背景句的万用句型:
… is a subject matter.
In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to … .
改写题目
题目:People in Britain do not carry guns. Some people believe that it will
make citizens unprotected, but some suggest that it would reduce violence in
society. Discuss two views.
英国警察不配戴枪枝。有人认为这样无法保护公民人身安全,有人认为可以减少社会暴力
。请论述这两种观点。
写法可有三种
e.g. There is a perception that it will make citizens unprotected, while a
counter-argument is that it would reduce violence in society. (加常用句)
e.g. Some people think that citizens would be unprotected, while some suggest
that violence could be reduced. (改句子顺序)
e.g. Some people think that it fails to protect citizens while some suggest
that it would minimize violence in society. (改句子结构)
说明/不说明立场写法
题目:Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it
causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s resources. Do you agree or
disagree?
有人认为飞机旅行应受限制,因它导致严重污染,消耗世界资源。你是否同意?
背景句+改写题目:There is little room for doubt about the convenience brought
by air travel. However, when it comes to its impact on the environment, no
conclusion has been arrived at. 之后+说明/不说明立场
说明立场
支持e.g. As far as I know, its benefits are far more over than its downsides.
反对e.g. My personal view is that its benefits cannot justify its harmful
effects.
不说明立场(只说出文章将对这问题进行讨论)
e.g. This essay will compare and contrast its benefits and downsides.
不知道这样大家有没有比较会写雅思写作Task 2的引言了^^
祝大家雅思准备顺利喔!
作者: kate22 (kate)   2016-07-11 15:27:00
谢谢分享
作者: avis20 (avis)   2016-07-11 19:08:00
推推~有帮助
作者: joe147 (joe)   2016-07-11 21:18:00
作者: mouio (瓜瓜)   2016-07-12 14:41:00
猜原PO是给Karol老师教的
楼主: gieo (光光)   2016-07-13 16:08:00
楼上猜对
作者: budinvv   2016-07-14 18:09:00
谢谢分享~ 第一段对我而言很困难。。。
作者: hapiying (Hana)   2016-07-15 15:43:00
Karol老师教的真的很清晰易懂好写耶~我也很喜欢~
作者: kkid258 (蜓婷)   2016-07-15 16:38:00
推分享~我也超不会写引言的~努力中

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