※ 引述《samok (记者只会抄公社低卡记录7)》之铭言：
: Worked with employees in a restaurant setting
Work 什么 雇主不知道
多少employees?
哪种的restaurant?顾客来源? 需要更多的detail
: 改写成好棒棒雇主会想HIRE你的句子
recruited, hired, trained and supervised more than 20 employees in a
restaurant with $2 million in annual sales(popular local restaurant)
让读著更有想像力