Monday Blue Buster 每周MBA生涯解惑专栏：Career Goal Essay答疑
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很少看到有人在讨论文件的工程问题，来抛砖引玉一下。
Q:
大家看看我的Goal 是否有大漏洞：
I have a long term plan to build up my own software company in IT industry.
China has so many talents of software engineering, but China dose not own
world famous software companies. While, India’s software industry have
boomed up and cultivated many well-known native software firms, such as
InfoSys and Satyam. On the other side, foreign software and solution
companies, such as SAP, Oracle and Microsoft, almost occupied China’s
software industry. Ironically, they hosted their R&D centers in China and
hired a bunch of Chinese engineers. I aspire to take the responsibility to
alter the situation and foster a world-class software service provider from
China.
For this goal, first of all, I should build and sharpen my business
capabilities before 35 years old. In Intel, I inspired my potential and
learned a lot about various leadership styles, effective team work, customer
orientation, and business operation. Especially, Intel’s open and global
working environment cultivated me to be a pro-active and initiative guy with
global thinking. However, only a UNC MBA program can offer me systematic
business management trainings to improve my general skill-sets of
international business operation. Secondly, I need a business co-partner, who
are smart and passion. In a top MBA school, it will be easy to get this task
done. Thirdly, I should find out the venture capital to support the setup of
my business. So I prefer study in US for my MBA program, where it is
relatively easier to get capital support.
A:
根据笔者遇过众多个案录取Harvard MBA、Yale MBA w/scholarship、Cornell……等常春
藤及top 20 mba奖学金的经验，以及遇过众多无美籍、无背景的个案，进入美国顶尖企业
如：管顾、尖牙股、PE/VC等企业任职的经验来看，这篇essay有远大目标是很好的！尤其
是输人不输阵及舍我其谁的精神，很令人景仰。
竞争力也强，能在Intel历练。对市场观察也有大方向了解。
但不知为何要从硬件转软件，也不知道最关键的”why you?”
还有很多细部问题。不解决是不会录取的，也无法实现生涯目标。
下面是问题与建议：
而这篇除了无差别趋势目标以外，主要是犯了绝大多数申请人都容易犯的谬误，叫做“将
错就错”