题目：
现在越来越多人喜欢使用网络的即时讯息，他们偏好在网络上打字胜于打电话。
1. 请给一些造成这种情况的原因。
2. 这样的沟通方式会产生什么样的潜在问题？
Nowadays, with the advance of technology, sending instant message on the net
is getting more and more popular . People prefer sending message in typing
way rather than giving phone call. That is because most of electronic
products have the function of surfing the net such as computers and
smartphones, which of them used by people everywhere. People not only can
send and get the instant message in one second, but don’t have to pay the
high expense of phone fee. Therefore, this kind of communication way becomes
a trend in life of people.
On the other hand, this new communication way have two potential problems.
Firstly, students may like to spend most of their time chatting with their
friends on the net, and neglect their school works. Secondly, if people
always interactive with people in this way, they will have bad human
relationships. Therefore, even if the new communication way is changing people
’s life, we still have to communicate with people in real way such as
companng with family and our friends, and should not be controlled by
electronic products.
几百年没写一篇完整的英文作文了
想请各位批改下我的作文
可以的话...希望能告诉我通过中高级写作还要加强哪些地方
谢谢各位