[写作] 戴尔美语练功坊 英检中级作文试题(5/30)

楼主: allenglish (小英之,得奖者不得要求 )   2013-05-31 12:05:25
戴尔美语练功坊 英检中级作文试题(5/30日)
中级英检作文题目出现以下考题:
提示:
许多人都有自己崇拜的偶像。请问你的偶像是谁? 如果有机会的话,你是否想成为青少年的偶像?
本篇作文的布局可分为两段,第一段说明自己的偶像,文中要提到身份,特质以及对于自己的影响。第二段表明自己是否想成为偶像的立场,并说明原因。
除了艺人以外,许多术业有专攻的人,像是运动员或政治家,都是我们自小崇拜的对象。就身份来说,同学们可以从以下相关人选来考虑:
" celebrity 名人
" sports star 运动明星
" athlete 运动员
" artist 艺术家, 艺人
" politician 政治家
" writer 作家
" columnist 专栏作家
" entrepreneur 企业家
" scholar 学者
" philosopher 哲学家
" journalist 记者
" musician 音乐家
" actor / actress 演员
" chef 主厨
" director 导演
" model 模特儿
" inventor 发明家
" scientist 科学家
" religious leader 宗教领导人
" educator 教育家
[示范]
Everyone has his idol, and I am no exception. Unlike many others who may
adore(v.景仰) an actor or singer, I regard Jamie Oliver, a famous British
chef(点出身份), as my idol.
*regard A as B 把A视为B
当然,如果同学一时想不到崇拜的名人,也可以写周遭的人物,例如自己的父母, 师长, 朋友等值得让你学习的对象。
接下来,我们可以用事件来描述偶像的特质, 例如:
- 写热心助人的特质:
He devotes all his life to helping the underprivileged(a.弱势的) families.
*devote + 时间 + to + N/Ving 投入…在….
写坚毅的特质:
She is persistent(a.坚持的) in pursuing(追求) the goal of perfection.
写歌声的感染力:
Her songs touch and inspire (v.启发) every generation.
最后可以写到偶像对于个人在价值观,工作或学习方面等的影响。
# I learned from Jienming Wang that it takes diligence(n.勤劳) to
attain(v.达成) greatness.
# Jeremy taught me never to give up on what I want.
# I have developed a healthful(a.有益健康的) eating habits since I started to
watch Jamie's programs.
# My idol enables me to understand that the most common thing may be the most
indispensable(a.不可或缺的) part in life.
第二段要先表明自己的立场。
[示范: 赞成+原因]
# I hope that I can be an idol of the youth in the future.
# I want to be famous for my talents and be recognized(认定) by people.
# I know my personality is a strong point of mine and I would like to be an
all-round (全能的) performer.
# I can set myself as a good example and encourage the youth to
accomplish(v.完成) their dreams.
[示范: 反对+原因]
# I would rather be an unknown person.
# I may be deprived(剥夺) of privacy(n.隐私).
# I am not that interested in being a performer.
# I am not confident of living up to (达成) the expectations from my fans.

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