用那台伴你成长的脚踏车

楼主: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:19:49
When I taught you
at eight to ride
a bicycle, loping along
beside you
as you wobbled away
on two round wheels,
my own mouth rounding
in surprise when you pulled
ahead down the curved
path of the park,
I kept waiting
for the thud
of your crash as I
sprinted to catch up,
while you grew
smaller, more breakable
with distance,
pumping, pumping
for your life, screaming
with laughter,
the hair flapping
behind you like a
handkerchief waving
goodbye.
昨天小雪贴ㄉ那个害阿肥想到
有人知道这个ㄇ
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:21:00
wobble跟pump用得真不错
作者: trolkin (边缘人003)   2020-06-16 17:22:00
When I am down and oh my soul so weary
作者: celtics1997 (山东之龙-禁邪赛鸽)   2020-06-16 17:22:00
Tqis ls an penis ,
楼主: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:23:00
怎么缩ㄚ
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:24:00
有那种一开始很蹒跚笨拙 到小屁孩想暴冲的动态感
楼主: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:26:00
我是觉得breakable让我有你怎么会出现在这里的感觉 但后来觉ㄉ其实很搭
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:26:00
可可
楼主: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:28:00
我觉得整ㄍ就是很有画面感 而且很好懂
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:29:00
好妈妈的画面
楼主: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:31:00
为什么不是把拔 是因为挥手帕吗挥手帕好像是妈妈才会想到ㄉ画面
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:33:00
如果是爸爸应该会说“Yooooo niiice son u finallylearn to ride this mofo”然后跟儿子一起暴冲
楼主: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:33:00
好坏ㄛ
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:35:00
:))

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