[Ask ] Is this sentence correct?

楼主: dennis870927 (松山正气哥)   2014-01-29 23:48:45
It has been half a year.
Wilbeck,my soul,alway accompany me when I study alone at midnight.
我心里想说的:
“已经过了半年了,威尔贝克(一家咖啡店),我的灵魂
总是在我深夜独自唸书时陪伴着我”
Is it?
作者: XGXAXYX   2014-01-31 04:35:00
我觉midnight很怪也许late night
作者: viable (《私人创作》)   2014-02-02 02:15:00
总觉得要用过去完成式之类的@@a噢看错漏看了 有用没错
作者: Austinwen (温)   2014-02-05 07:51:00
It seems kinda odd...

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