[Ask ] [ask]please help me grammer

楼主: leo1208 (活到老打到老)   2013-10-14 16:52:36
Hi everybody, please help me check the grammer of following sentence, thank you.
1.According to the Tobacco Hazards Prevention Act, both indoor and outdoor areas are designated as no smoking area.
2.Anyone who smokes in this area will be fined NT $ 2000 to NT$ 10000.
3.Thank you for supporting the smoke-free Maple Snow Garden.
作者: sidh97 (sidh97)   0000-00-00 00:00:00
1. both the indoors and outdoors are designated assmoke free areas. (sounds better than no smoking)2. will be fined FROM 2000 NTD to.....etc etc(i dont think you use the $ if it's not 'dollar')3. good. (for 1.use either non-smoking or smoke-free.
作者: lisaweng (piglet)   0000-00-00 00:00:00
2. anyone smoking in these areas are subject to afine up to NT$10000Sry. I meant "is subject to".
楼主: leo1208 (活到老打到老)   0000-00-00 00:00:00
Thanks everyone. It's helpful.
作者: Smallmi (米)   0000-00-00 00:00:00
Re 1, do you just mean that smoking is prohibited in'all' areas?Re 2, Anyone who smokes in "these" areas will be fineda minimum of NTD2000, up to....(NT$2000 is ok since$ does mean 'dollar'.Re 3, Thank you for supporting a smoke-freeenvironment in the Maple Snow Garden.and btw, it's 'grammar' :)
楼主: leo1208 (活到老打到老)   0000-00-00 00:00:00
Yes, all area. But most smoke people think outside canSo we emphasize outside is also non-smokingHa ha, my poor english
作者: nkotb131 (永不脱鞋)   0000-00-00 00:00:00
It's ok, we're all here to learn and improve.
作者: furball   0000-00-00 00:00:00
2. Violators will be fined...agree with Sma1lami, 3. Thank you for supporting oursmoke-free environment.

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