问了一下外师的看法
He paid attention to even the small details. He would work long hours each
day, editing song lyrics and planning different special effects. Many nights,
he would even sleep on his office couch.
Q: He would work long hours each day, editing song lyrics and planning
different special effects.
Is the part “,editing song lyrics and planning different special effects”
used here to “give additional or more detail information about what the
author meant by working long hours”?
A: Yes!
※ 引述《fans0390 ()》之铭言：
: 这是分词构句的第三种用法，用来详细解释上一句。
: he would work long hours each day, →主要意思 (general)
: editing song lyrics →说明他为什么工时很长 (specific)
: planning different special effects →说明他为什么工时很长 (specific)
: 如果你用would edit 跟would plan的话，就变成三个独立句子了
: 但你用 and he edited and he planed同样也变成三个独立句子
: (因为and是对等连接词，等于你把这三个句子的重要性都设为一样)
: =======此部份保留，原因是我用比较简单的方式说明，但造成分歧================
: =======有想了解的话再私讯跟我说，我会完整的讲明============================
: =======因为要在这边说明的话已超过高中、大学的程度==========================
: 如果要还原的话，如下
: he would work long hours each day because he edited... and planed...
: ===========================================================================
: 分词构句有一个重点是把比较不重要的句子降为副属子句。
: 而这就是它在这个例题的用法
: ※ 引述《cocoland (easy)》之铭言：
: : 各位好
: : 想求助一句关于高中英文的文法
: : 不知道自己的想法是否正确
: : 句子为文章中的一句话 如下：
: : 这段主要在说这个人很认真
: : （上文 He paid attention to even the small details.)
: : He would work long hours each day,
: : editing song lyrics and planning different special effects.
: : （下文 Many nights, he would convice his wife to sleep on his office couch.)
: :