最近练习写英文作文
然后题目如下
The rich are getting richer while the poor are getting poorer. Inequality is
the most urgent problem facing humanity today. What are the causes of income
inequality, and what solutions do you recommend? Please write in at least 200
words (3 paragraphs) a well organized essay to express your opinion
我自己写income inequality 的原因来自family condition
但帮我改的人说我这样写的方向不对
我上网查了一下他的定义
Income inequality refers to the extent to which income is distributed in an
uneven manner among a population.
我还是觉得会原因是来自个人家庭背景，资源丰富等等，另外我写的solution是
self-reflection(找出有无可改进之处)，但这样写也被讲写错方向了QQ
想请教写family condition是错的吗? 如果这个方向不对应该往什么方向好 谢谢
(写essay 要写对方向好难..)