各位好，最近想练习写作，但不知道自己程度在哪
还想麻烦各位前辈鞭一下，让自己知道自己哪写得不好
最近看经济学人，将文章的内容自己做一个总结并写篇文章
(当然总结可能不太对或偏离主题，但目的是看看自己的文章流畅度、正确性)
经济学人文章主题是 Of banks and bureaucrats(不能贴网址内容，说有广告嫌疑)
我自己写的文章如下，再请各位给我点建议了 谢谢
(如果这样去考雅思 或托福大概多少呢?我知道字数太少...)
The recenly news suggest that India's banking system confront a unwelthy
economic issue: Bank hava been damaged by its lenders. Because India has
soared their loan to mini credit and politician using their politic power to
get loan to supply money to their cronies. Besides, the bankers have wildly
optimistc about the economic make situation worse.
Banks have positive correlation with economy. When economic enviorment is
in boomed and active. The corporates always need a lot of money to investment
their factory or R&D in order to keep their competitivenesss. By borrowing
money from banks is always a traditional way to get funds. But it is
countrary to India. According to statistic bureau released data recently
shows that despite India's economic growth in GDP of 7.9%, one of the top
economic growths in the world. However, India's lender have lost over 200
billion rupees in recent quarter.
Soaring mini credit to those SME is popular to India in previous years.
It makes some companys which can not afford interest and amount to get bank
credit limited. And other corporates who have huge influence in India using
their powerful to dominate banks. These abusing loan makes bank cannot get
their money back.
To solve these problem. RBI prefer to consolidated 27 banks into less
than half numbers. Morever, Privating those state-owned banks is a method to
deal with these problem. But the most important things for India is to remove
their old idas that Banks should be owned by government.
谢谢各位的协助 感恩