楼主:
longwei (Wei)
2015-05-02 02:35:37这是我看完前三章的一些修改建议
Here're some of my recommendations for Chapter 1-3.
请再给我一点时间看完后面章节
Please give me more time to finish the rest.
(Please give me 感觉有点恳求)
or
没那么急的话就
I'll read the rest chapters when I have free time.
作者:
timkoch (Moe)
2015-05-02 02:45:00excuse me. what's the mean 'rest' here.
作者: zxc321zxc321 (Boundary Effect) 2015-05-02 02:53:00
free time改 leisure time比较适合吧～
楼主:
longwei (Wei)
2015-05-02 02:54:00the rest 剩下的
作者: zxc321zxc321 (Boundary Effect) 2015-05-02 02:54:00
rest 后面还是得加上剩下的什么 英文不像中文那么口语
加个parts就可以噜@@不加基本上也没有问题啦XD