Hello, my name is Rita Chen. I graduated from college.
As the hobby for me, I have been studying English in my leisure time.
The English-print magazine I like most is The Economist.
I also appreciate the studio of English classroom.
This two contribute me so much.
The reason I choose the teacher as my occupation is because I like the
children and I like the English language.
I have one-year experience of English teaching.
And I have the TOIEC scored 655.
I am ready.
Please give me the opportunity. Thanks.
败偷
帮我看看哪里写错了
This is a book.My English is very good.
作者:
BerITh (恋爱修理亮)
2016-08-02 01:02:00真的要看英文能力应该就直接跟妳交谈了吧妳表现想要这个工作的强烈动机比较重要
履历内容，一般、可用、不用改。但，如果妳很想要这个工作机会，需主动打电话去关心面试的时间。
作者:
gruenherz (DOREMIFA噗噗噗～～)
2016-08-02 01:17:00哇塞 精进学人耶 毕业学校打LSE就更强了记得讲些处理小孩子的成功战绩
作者:
gruenherz (DOREMIFA噗噗噗～～)
2016-08-02 02:01:00经进学人锋面就很有梗了其实用探险活宝跟海绵宝宝交儿童英语应该不错
作者:
pups003 (冈本)
2016-08-02 02:05:00我推荐辛普森家庭
作者:
gruenherz (DOREMIFA噗噗噗～～)
2016-08-02 02:10:00天线宝宝 有英国腔才是上流钥匙
第三句您要不要改成"My favorite English magazine isThe Economist."另外，用"why I chose teaching as a career 来做第五句开头，您觉得如何，我想这样会不会比较简洁
these two ？children前面加the是指定吧，你又没去那边分数那边看起来怪怪的，最后好像能力不足在拜托对方
作者:
dogp (捞好回台)
2016-08-02 11:19:00说真的，这个比较像求职文，就是: 拜托，给我工作!那种感觉我会偏好写自己的经历让人知道我准备好惹，而不是告诉别人I'm ready
作者:
csco ( ARM 株式会社)
2016-08-02 16:08:00这是整篇中翻英的概念...