[分享] 雅思锦囊:剑11写作CSR专题

楼主: twstudy (Wallace)   2016-07-15 12:07:47
As well as making money,
businesses also have social responsibilities.
这是作文题目
相信有参加考生读书会的捧油
已如火如荼展开这个主题的点子蒐集工作了
Nevertheless,
雅思不需要过于深入的概念
同时大家都想得到的见解很可能不会受到青睐
这个主题需要把普通常识做一番思考之后
写出来的“洞见”才能在内容上获取好分数
企业社会责任的一环:
企业志愿服务
Corporate Volunteering, CV
我认为是一个超好发挥的部分
而且volunteering也是IELTS Speaking好用的素材
我建议考生累积这领域的点子放在口袋边
当成解题的优先数据库
在谈作文以前先来看看volunteering如何解speaking
Part 1: What do you like to do in your free time?
Wallce's Answer:
Most of my non-working hours are devoted to
volunteering my services as a carer at the day center
for homeless people. Knowing my contribution to them
is meaningful.
把非工作时间投入到在“流浪者之家”(这是半开玩笑的翻译)
做志工。
Part 2: Describe a family (not your own family) that you like.
Wallace's idea:
I feel that it is great for the Lin family to volunteer
to provide a friendly sympathetic ear for women who have
encountered broken marriages.
同理,企业的社会责任其中一项是企业志愿服务
考生可以写企业应尽力融入所在社区
和社区各团体maintain a rewarding relationship
借由read stories on local newspapers
体察local organisation's needing assistance
实际行动举二例:
(1)捐赠物资给 needy families
(2)资助 pupils from working-class families
who have fallen on hard times
(以上全部不会用到the poor/poor people)
最后结论一定要提到:
CSR的key successful factor是staff participation
(员工参与)
看完以上的浅浅说明
其实你已经上完一课企业策略管理了!
其实CSR的概念来自将企业所在的local community
看成“策略伙伴”,由“利害关系人(stakeholders)”延伸而来的
一位好的雅思家教要饱读诗书、学富五车
直接提供考生speaking & writing需要的独特见解
Wallace的雅思先备知识(prior knowledge)课程
让考生省下大量脑力激荡却未必有高品质内涵的时间
更重要的免费上课!
因为Wallace身为独立家教不追求商业利益极大化
难免因挡人财路而被嘘文之类的
喔!不!我离题了!
下次雅思锦囊再会!
作者: chuubbyy (byetos)   2016-07-18 02:21:00
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