※ 引述《ddv8uc ()》之铭言：
: In my opinion, I would totally agree with that. We should limit the time, to
Omit "In my opinion." Just say "I totally agree . . . "
: control the children under 12 not to be addicted to social media or internet.
: Nowadays many parents hire technological babysitter to look after their
s
: children. This is to say, they play video on tablet and let their children
the parents video games tablets
: watch this technological device all day. Then again, it's not health for
healthy
: childhood. For instance, after playing video games or watching films long
children going through childhood for a
: time, it's hard to focus on static activity, such as reading books or
the children would find it difficult to . . . activities
: chatting with friends face to face. Because their concentration are already
because they concentration span is rather short
: damaged. Moreover, accompanied usage of the internet is as well as necessary.
* I do not know what you want to say here.
: We can find various information over internet. Yet, the children can not
on the Internet cannot
: judge what kind of information, which they indeed need or are harmless. In
whether the information is useful or trustworthy
: order to avoid this situation at all costs, therefore parents play the
delete "therefore" an
: important role to teach their children by accompany. Above all, it seems to
delete "by accompany"
: be better, if the children do not start early to use technological devices.
: Then, I wont say enjoy that. I know this is kind of disaster.
: I hope it's still readable. Thank a lot :)
For your reference. :)